Gerald, second draft done…..

I have managed to complete the second draft of Gerald, thanks to my awesome critique partner, who has given her time so unselfishly to help me.

We have made some very nice tweaks to the ending and I hope you will all enjoy the book when it is published.

The competition is just over a week away, and I am confident I can make the deadline, so fingers crossed please.

I have also updated the first chapter on here with the latest draft, please have a read and let me know what you think.

Coming soon, is a little treat, courtesy of my critiques partner’s 11 year old daughter.  Watch this space 🙂

One Commentto Gerald, second draft done…..

  1. Christine says:

    Yay!! Second revision done!! You are well on your way to having Gerlad ready for the competition deadline!! Great job!!

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